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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  what is it you're seeking with your profile?? Because to me; it reads like a shopping list....a dash of this and a dash of that.... But.... There's no personality in your words to show the reader who you are....unless of course you're a couple that likes to have things only on your terms, which I'm sure you're not like that at all.... - Posted from rhpmobile

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  You sound nice, and I think your profile may not be doing you justice. Personally I like happy and positive, detailed profiles. A few tips from me: - Upload pics of both of you, preferably together - Write a bit more about what you're into and what you have to offer - Match the "Seeking" to your profile. You're looking for a woman in one place, a couple in another - Be aware that single women looking for couples are called Unicorns because they are so rare, and they can be extremely picky. Your profile as it is is ok, but in my opinion not very tempting. - Check out the Time Wasters forum here: http://redhotpie.com.au/Adult-Forums/No-time-wasters-49916 Good luck xx

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  rupamohan

  9 years ago

  Public pic - Obviously unique to you but considering you are looking for women only I am not sure if it is good enough.Written profile----------------- What you will find in 100s of profile - recent pic What you will find in 1000s of profile - Shaved and waxed cpl looking for slim or athletic dance couples. What you will find in about a million profile - Everything else written in your profile. Good Luck!!!

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  Any tips on what they could do to improve?

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  AnnieWhichway

  9 years ago

  We cant tell what to write but you have to convince the magical unicorn to come meet. So you need to put out there why she should. Write about yourselves. But some classy photos are worth a thousand words. So you can do one or the other but if you can do both, you can catch her.

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  rupamohan

  9 years ago

  Quoting 'Meander' Any tips on what they could do to improve? Meander, how are you? It is generally very rare for me to address some one directly in public forum but rare events do happen..lol >> so that's what you think they're doing wrong. Humm.. not exactly I will say this is how they are placed in a competition of chances. If they are happy with it there is nothing wrong. It is like when we buy a lotto..we know it is a game of rare chance but we still buy it. You never know..lol Asking at forum is what exactly they are doing wrong as many forum visitors are not active root seeker...it is sufficient to read other profiles and get hint...just kidding. OK on a serious note this is how I guess a profile can be dissected if the intention is to get a root. Pic - 70% influence Information in text boxes with selection - 20 %, For example things like smoking, safe sex etc..we have to discard 1/3 couples simply on the basis that safe sex is not on the menu. Free flow text in profile I guess accounts for <10% influence. Knowing very well that many members don't read profile beyond 2 lines and many out of this lot are still very good candidate for a root. What to put in a profile? You simply have to play to your strength. Very hard to say what to write much easier to define what not to write. There is no guaranty that a unique profile will get you a root fast unless uniqueness is desirable in that sense a unique profile can work against you. Here are my tips not in any order. a) Concentrate on other sections of profile. free flow text section has least influence. b) Just put enough details for someone to be interested to contact you. Do not write any more. c) Any warnings should be very short, very specific, at the top and strictly only if there is a real need of it. d) Say something about play logistics and about your availability. People may want to know how far you are willing to travel and how free you are to meet. e) Tell anything special you can offer.Then comes personal writing styles. In many profiles I find people say I am like this and because I am like this I expect you to be same. I find it very rude to say like this. But I don't judge other on this. I mean it will be very rude for me to write like this so it is about self judgement. But if others write like this it is up to them to use their own definition of what is rude.To give an example. For me it is OK to say I am healthy. I am looking for healthy people. For me it is rude to say I am healthy and because I am healthy you too have to be healthy. Though both sentence have same result but I consider latter sentence rude. But this is about personal style. One has to follow what they believe in.

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  That escalated quickly. Good luck OP.

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  Seachange

  9 years ago

  You asked. Lol. ;-)

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  luvsilver

  9 years ago

  Scared them off !! Mr Luvsilver

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  Mischeviouslad

  9 years ago

  Not here 4 as much fun as 'they' perhaps..... thought.

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