M38
Looking for a little Critique :)
July 25 2013
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RHP User
11 years ago
Looking at your profile and pictures , all seems good to me...i blamed Adelaide for it definitely not you.
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RHP User
11 years ago
it's called the City of Churches for a reason....and you look pretty,soooo must be Miss Adelaide
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Cheekyarses
11 years ago
Well - I like it... You have everything in there that catches my eye 👀 mrs cheeky
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RHP User
11 years ago
little critique.....
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On_Safari
11 years ago
But I'd remove the line about loving girls who like to be gone down on. I can't speak for anyone else but that is soooo often mentioned in guys profiles it gets boring. Be original....
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RHP User
11 years ago
too young, too good looking and too interesting.Now fuck off !
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RHP User
11 years ago
Quoting 'karynb' little critique..... lol... :P Quoting 'I_N_D_A_G_I_N_E' But I'd remove the line about loving girls who like to be gone down on. I can't speak for anyone else but that is soooo often mentioned in guys profiles it gets boring. Be original....Yeah.. did want to take it out.. but I really enjoy it, and thought it was important to put in what I was looking for. Thanks tho.. Think I'll take that bit out than :)
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RHP User
11 years ago
Adelaide seems to have a small community on RHP... up to you to spread the word . BTW I'll be visiting on business again soon, so get that word out there quick! ... lol Good luck SF xx
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RHP User
11 years ago
To me is a little too generic. I agree with indagine about removing that line. I would also go with something a little more unique for your username. There is nothing wrong with your profile, just nothing that stands out... For me anyway :) You have to remember that girls in here are generally flooded with messages. If you don't want to work on the profile side of things, or can't think of anything else to add, just make sure any messages you send are tailored to the girl you are sending them to! Grab someone's attention! MAKE her look at you instead of the other 10 messages she has to sort through :)- Posted from rhpmobile
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RHP User
11 years ago
Well I think its just a normal profile ... no reason it shouldn't be working for you.
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RHP User
11 years ago
it's fine.
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RHP User
11 years ago
if you put yourself out there......
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RHP User
11 years ago
50zcool .....needs a 'like' button .... that tickled my funny bone lol
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RHP User
11 years ago
But you have said. Very attractive. This is subjective.Your photo's....I think the one that you have as your main picture is grainy and shows a little bit of immaturity in it. Sorry, this is just how I am seeing itand I don't like bathroom selfiesMaybe try and have a play round with a camera, or ask a good friend to take some cool pics of you. Something a bit different
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RHP User
11 years ago
trying to be harshJust honest is alland people make decision unfortunately quickly and this can be based on photo's initially. Do something to make yourself stand out from the crowd. If you are very attractive, show that nice smile off in a better quality pictureYeh, yeh we love it how guys are great in bed...but we actually want someone for their personality too, not just sex talk
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RHP User
11 years ago
Are you being a grumpy old fart? He may be young, gorgeous and apparently well hung, BUT your BUTT still rocks.
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RHP User
11 years ago
Quoting 'paintme' Are you being a grumpy old fart? He may be young, gorgeous and apparently well hung, BUT your BUTT still rocks. Butt will be back soon
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RHP User
11 years ago
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RHP User
11 years ago
I like your pictures and your profile. Maybe the entire list of kinks may intimidate some women?Good luck!
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amiira
11 years ago
Heya :) here's some honest-but-kindly-meant critique -I'd tend to agree with Meeka, maybe prune the Kink list a little :) they're all totally legit, but personally I'd probably like to discuss them in private rather than trumpeting them about in public. (AND you have to bear in mind that there are many sheltered girls out there who have no idea what Bukkake and Watersports actually are! They'd probably bring sunscreen and bathers...)Overall, I definitely like your profile, especially the bit about snowboarding, photography, music and design. Tell me a bit more about that! E.g. do you go snowboarding regularly? (Here you could make a quip about skiiers vs snowboarders... as a skiier, I know that always gets my blood boiling!! ;P) What kind of music are you into? You said you like travelling, where have you travelled? What do you love about it? Have you studied design? Are you into industrial design or graphic design, or both? Girls (and couples too) like brains, show us that you have some! :)I'd lighten up on your (well-intentioned, I'm sure) intimations about assisting in sexual fantasies. In fact, I'd not talk about that at all. Your 'I am looking for' section includes couples and mentions the word kinky, that's really all you need -- all those who are looking for that sort of thing will pick up the code clear as day ;) Less is more!!And, if you're into photography, surely you can do something nicer with your pics? For example, why don't you make your second pic (the one on the porch outside) your main pic, but crop it a bit and lighten it up? I'm sure you're no stranger to white balance and light curves, use them! ;) And although someone else has said that your current profile pic looks a little 'immature', I have to say I like it because it shows a bit of your personality. I love the 'Mo' on your lappy and the cheeky grin :) Now if you were only looking AT the camera, that would be a cool shot! Eye-contact is super-powerful and can be used to engage a viewer, so you can use it to your advantage.Why don't you maybe get/borrow a tripod (or find a convenient chair) and take some more 'sophisticated' self-pics outside the bathroom? A 10-sec timer can be very useful... that plus some high-contrast black and white can work wonders :) get creative!Good luck in your search :)
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RHP User
11 years ago
how the bit of info you have given blinkyblueeyes has piqued her interest ?Perfect ! Don't give her or anyone else any more until they're sitting in font of you with a glass in their hand !
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RHP User
11 years ago
Quoting '50zkool'how the bit of info you have given blinkyblueeyes has piqued her interest ? Perfect ! I don't quite think "Good luck in your search :)" equals interest.
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RHP User
11 years ago
"Overall, I definitely like your profile, especially the bit about snowboarding, photography, music and design. Tell me a bit more about that! E.g. do you go snowboarding regularly? (Here you could make a quip about skiiers vs snowboarders... as a skiier, I know that always gets my blood boiling!! ;P) Don't give her or anyone else any more until they're sitting in font of you with a glass in their hand !The actual point is, and I'm sure you got it, was not telling too much and leaving some mystery !But congratulations on finding a gap to slip a knife into.
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RHP User
11 years ago
Lighten up. = Tongue in cheek emoticon medley.
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RHP User
11 years ago
👍😜😉😎- Posted from rhpmobile
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