M32
Nice guy profile
June 12 2015
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RHP User
10 years ago
I havent looked at your profile, and Im not going to because after just reading your forum post, you write well, and have shown you can string a few words together to describe yourself.you sound confident and thats always a good start. I dont know what attracts the young girls your age, probably hip hop gangster gym junkies with perfect bodies? If thats the case, charm them with your words. You have a cute photo, boy next door kind of face, so use your charm and wit and confidence to write in detail about yourself. P.s dont take it all too seriously, you wont always get exactly what you want, so dont come back here in a month asking why nobody has contacted you. And dont think every female on here is waiting just for you.but stay relaxed about it and you just never know...
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RHP User
10 years ago
Standing out is a difficult thing to do here. Photos and specifically the main profile picture is the primary route that brings people to look at your profile. If you have a picture of you saving a whale, or helping a little old lady across the street (maybe not on a sex site??), or of you winning a Mr Nice Guy award may help. Writing about your self is not always easy, but your profile write up is not set in stone. Experiment with it. Be creative, and don't be over critical of your own writing. There is plenty of useful information on the net in regard to writing, critical writing, creative writing, subjective and objective writing are good search words to find your way to how to write lessons. A good profile should take all these styles into account. Critical writing. An analysis of the subject discussing both the positive and negatives.Though negatives are to be avoided in profiles they can increase the value of the positives. Consideration of all the angles can also help you find new positives. Written as a draft plan critical writing can help you focus in on what will help bring your point across. Subjective writing. This is the where the writing is about your personal subjective view, it will generally use many personal pronouns, I, my, etc This is the way most profile are written up. unfortunately this becomes very bland after people have read thousands of them. Objective writing. This is the subject as considered in the 3rd person, it is unbiased, and factual. Write as if you are writing a description of a friend, or write as if you are someone else describing your self. Though generally not a good base to form a profile it is a good way to form the structure that you then reformat into the "subjective" form. Creative writing. Yep being creative is formalized. You can bring in your own style or you can emulate existing styles. Good creative writing involves a consistent style throughout the piece. Moving from one style to another is damaging to the content if done add hoc, and uncomfortable for the reader to read. Creative writing make a piece unique and distinctive, a must to stand out from the crowd. My first profile write ups involved applying the above. Using the objective eye in the subjective space. I used a simple style that was easy to read with short concise sentences. I kept the about me in the strict first person, and the what I am after in the 3rd person singular. As I learned how members reacted and saw the profile, I made constant edits fine tuning what I wanted and who I was looking for. In time I had what I considered my perfect profile. But....
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RHP User
10 years ago
It does not matter what you write about your self. It is not the subject, you and what you are and who you are after, or even the style that will attract. It is the mood of the piece that brings a member to be interested. Pick some random profiles, read them and then sum it up in a word. This word is what you are after. You may read a profile and think, arrogant. Another may bring to mind, moron and yet another may bring to mind sexy. Do the details matter. Yes but only in regard to conditional, or requiremental details. When people read they look for what is not wanted. The rest is generally ignored and really superfluous. You may read a profile, if at some point you read "dont like nice guys" it will not matter what is said in the rest of the profile, or how you sum it up. You will not make contact, you are nice. A good rule of thumb, unless you have some pet hates, is to avoid conditional information. So start reading profiles until you find a few that you sum up as nice. Use those as a template to write your own nice profile.
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Seachange
10 years ago
Welcome ti rhp. Check out Meander s recent post in how to write a profile. I believe it is title 10 commandments on how to write a profile. Lol. Anyway, a a short sweet advice, don't have a cock pic as your main pic and have nice smiling pic of yourself which you have done. Bravo. You are already in the running. So read the commandments. After you fix your prifile remember to contact women with a simple respectful message, referencing something that caught your eyes in her profile. So read their profile and see if you are what they are looking for. Good luck.
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RHP User
10 years ago
You have a lovely profile picture and a lovely smile. I also like your profile. Are you looking for a girlfriend? Sounds a little bit like it from how you have written your profile. Also really lovely. Gee I just think you are lovely! (Insert dirty old woman wink) I am not sure just how active younger people are on RHP so it may not be as easy to meet up with the locals in your area. Personally I have found the online dating thing a bit difficult and a time Waster, but it's different for everyone. My advice to you is to keep an eye out on the events (refer to events tab) and go and meet people face to face. For me it has lead to knowing lots of people & having friends who will go to all the naughty parties with me. Good luck.
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cleopatrababe
10 years ago
Dont put yourself down u are very handsome ..lovely smile and openess about you ..you could work on your profile a bit more let woman know a bit more about you ...and yes its a waiting game and be patient and respectful good luck - Posted from rhpmobile
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RHP User
10 years ago
..... or at least it would seem that way ..... with the amount of female profiles that mention tatts, bad boy and motor cycles... ... be your self hun .... ... paint a picture of what you desire ..... formulate a criteria and attributes of that ideal ..... then address that criteria ..... with the real you. ....... sounds a bit like studying for exams ..... but he principle is the same ..... Life tip no # 1. ...... the people who succeed in life are the ones who best identify the requirement ...... and best provide it ..... whether it be the educations system.... occupation...... or lovers Y'know ..... scrap all the above ...... at 22 you really want a slice of everything that the universe provides .... I would suggest casting your net ...... far wider that you could ever image .... and watch the magic enlightenment unfold kind regards Ulysses 42
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RHP User
10 years ago
Love the pics and the positive profile. I'd suggest getting rid of the template sentences though. You're obviously an eloquent guy and I think you can do better. Like Lily said, I just wrote a little forum that maybe of some help, called the Ten Commandments of writing a male profile (not to be confused with Slickz's hilarious spoof.) Here it is: http://redhotpie.com.au/Adult-Forums/The-Ten-Commandments-for-writing-a-male-profile-48927 Good luck, grasshopper x
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RHP User
10 years ago
Quoting 'Blindman67' It does not matter what you write about your self. It is not the subject, you and what you are and who you are after, or even the style that will attract. It is the mood of the piece that brings a member to be interested. Pick some random profiles, read them and then sum it up in a word. This word is what you are after. You may read a profile and think, arrogant. Another may bring to mind, moron and yet another may bring to mind sexy. Perth, the two couples and two single men on my friends list have profiles that really resonate with me as they all made me nod and laugh. All their personalities really shine through in them, so have a look. (They're novels, but that's one thing I love about them).
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RHP User
10 years ago
I would be taking advice from the ladies( not mr blindman in this instance- thats plain confusing for a young guy)After all, we can tell you what a woman is attracted to.
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RHP User
10 years ago
Do you know that girl on your friends list was on the American The Bachelor? Careful who you befriend, young 'un.
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Seachange
10 years ago
Quoting 'Meander' Do you know that girl on your friends list was on the American The Bachelor? Careful who you befriend, young 'un. Yes!!! that is why she looked so familiar... Lol. Jade something... quite a controversial one. haha
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AnnieWhichway
10 years ago
Looks strangely familar. Surely you've seen him around Lily?
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Seachange
10 years ago
Quoting 'Any_Whichway' Looks strangely familar. Surely you've seen him around Lily? Cheeky bugga.
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AnnieWhichway
10 years ago
Quoting 'lilyorchid' Quoting 'Any_Whichway' Looks strangely familar. Surely you've seen him around Lily? Cheeky bugga. OP's profile will be getting hit a bit now. Be getting a bit of a chubby there OP........... Any advertising is good advertising on here.................well most of the time. Sorry Lily. Borrowed one of your dudes with the sunnies.............send him back when i'm finished with him. Hopes he's a top. God that was nearly embarrasing. Nearly did a Lily by calling OP Mr Spunge........wrong thread. Remember that one?
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RHP User
10 years ago
Quoting 'lilyorchid' Quoting 'Meander' Do you know that girl on your friends list was on the American The Bachelor? Careful who you befriend, young 'un. Yes!!! that is why she looked so familiar... Lol. Jade something... quite a controversial one. haha Jade Roper, she'll also be on Bachelor in Paradise with Ashley S (though sadly no Michelle Money) not that I'm a fan of such low brow entertainment or anything ;) (for the Playboy shoots google Jade Elizabeth - First name + Middle name... not really an uncrackable porn star name there)
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RHP User
10 years ago
I've not watched any Bachelor episode since Trista and Ryan over a decade ago, I just know a fake pic when I see one. I see "she" is gone now. Hey Perth, are you taking any of the tips above on board or are we talking amongst ourselves here?
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Mischeviouslad
10 years ago
........ that is all......
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RHP User
10 years ago
You came in a bit late there... :-P
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Mischeviouslad
10 years ago
... that I don't come early
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RHP User
10 years ago
Quoting 'cleopatrababe' Dont put yourself down u are very handsome ..lovely smile and openess about you ..you could work on your profile a bit more let woman know a bit more about you ...and yes its a waiting game and be patient and respectful good luck - Posted from rhpmobile It's only a waiting game if you do nothing but check you mail, if you want to meet people who interest you then you need to be pro-active, male, female, tv whatever.
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RHP User
10 years ago
Quoting 'Meander' Perth, the two couples and two single men on my friends list have profiles that really resonate with me as they all made me nod and laugh. All their personalities really shine through in them, so have a look. (They're novels, but that's one thing I love about them). Point made??? I think.. LOL inviting someone to your profile to show they are blocked makes one wonder why you would bother? The Blocking thread would have been more appropriate me thinks, could have even been humorous if done well. Though the lonely thread may be the place for me now I know you dont like me.. :( :P
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RHP User
10 years ago
Hey you are a sweetie, and live very close by to me. Sorry I best insert a dirty old woman wink too like Meeka Xxx - Posted from rhpmobile
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RHP User
10 years ago
I wasn't talking to you. Just because you're blocked, doesn't mean Perth is (or anyone for that matter).
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Mischeviouslad
10 years ago
The only thing worse than being talked about - is not being talked about! (Oscar Wilde)
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RHP User
9 years ago
I'm still new to this whole thing myself - relationships/dating/sex, online and offline. Some of the most reasonable things said so far.
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RHP User
9 years ago
Was wondering why other sites don't have a newbie/beginner forum, for instance, to get a bit better perspective, and save some confusion for people. I started off trying online dating 5 months ago feeling confident about it, but naïve about the lack of responses and why, and some of the other BS.
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