RHP

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Profile Check - Calling anyone who wants to

May 02 2013

So, I've done some updates on my profile - not an entire re-write but more subtle changes, some subtractions and additions and a little algebra on the side.Just hoping some wonderful people with free time and willingness wouldn't mind having a read over and tell me if it makes sense? I'm not looking for a plug, more at that point where I've been staring at something so long I'm not sure if I'm reading it forwards or backwards - I'm not even sure if I could tell the difference between coke and pepsi right now.Any goers much appreciated in advance!Thanks

Comments

  • Paradisepair

    Paradisepair

    12 years ago

    The focus on the dribbling first up wasn't a great sell.Not saying you shouldn't keep it in there to express your humour etc, but first up - hook me with something sexy.Otherwise, loved the pics and all of it but then I've got a huge bias towards creatives and people following their passion (and tradies but that's neither here nor there).

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    I like short and sweet profiles not Steven king novels....but all in all it looks ok....I'm a little worried though about the whole drooling talk...- Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    I think you have left your guitar on the stove.

  • Mr_MrsAraps

    Mr_MrsAraps

    12 years ago

    Would drop the dribbling.Cheers,W.

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Yep me too - the dribbling put me right off! And how can you not like chocolate??????????   Pusscat xxx

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Dropped the drooling and did a further thorough re-write - check it again when it's unlocked if you don't mind.Appreciate the feedback so far :)

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Quoting 'woody_pusscat' Yep me too - the dribbling put me right off! And how can you not like chocolate??????????   Pusscat xxx Read carefully, doesn't say I don't like it :)

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Quoting '50zkool' I think you have left your guitar on the stove. You've never cranked out some air guitar while doing the dishes?!

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Quoting 'magestick' Quoting '50zkool' I think you have left your guitar on the stove. You've never cranked out some air guitar while doing the dishes?! Much prefer the vacuum cleaner, longer neck for stylin', doubles as microphone stand and no one can hear me sing !

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Certainly has me smiling and wanting to know more- Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    I never saw the old profile it was locked when I tried.This is good, opening paragraph is awesome !My only criticism is I think in "I am looking for" for you give too much away, you have intimated your sexuality in the opening paragraph.Leave some mystery, you only need to cover the hook, not have them choke on the bait !

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Love your profile, the fact that you put effort to show who you are and provide photo's, awesome. The fact that you play guitar is always a draw card for me! Might go back and revisit our profile now!

  • flimac

    flimac

    12 years ago

    Well the original version had that effect Karynb, the rewrite - or at least the start had a slightly different effect ;) So a bit of shameless promotion by the op shall be backed up by positive feedback from me - a totally charming gentleman who actually knows how to use both his brains :) - Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Quoting 'karynb'Certainly has me smiling and wanting to know more- Posted from rhpmobile thinking womans crumpet but the picture with the finger thing...says I lost my little cap with the propeller on top

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Awesome now!   Pusscat xxxx

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Quoting 'tuscanred' thinking womans crumpet   Surely you remember already giving this endorsement to another studmuffin on here? And if OP can be utterly self-indulgent without getting grief, everyone please feel free to praise my profile too.

  • Mischeviouslad

    Mischeviouslad

    12 years ago

    See also.... "Im Brian, and so is my wife"Oh, yeah..... thats right.... so... I edited my profile .....so..... all the ladies of RHP... look at moooeeeeeeeeeeee toololDG

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Quoting 'Ms_Devious' Quoting 'tuscanred' thinking womans crumpet   Surely you remember already giving this endorsement to another studmuffin on here? And if OP can be utterly self-indulgent without getting grief, everyone please feel free to praise my profile too.   does not do you jusrice. when your seen in the flesh I think you can make a straight girl bi and a gay guy straight ...........your just to hot for rhp yeah I tend to praise the stud muffins but put it up in neon if I have given them a test drive and they run just as good as the add says

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    I loved your profile, made me laugh. I think you would be great fun, pity you are in Melbourne. Come to the Ville where its a lot warmer!

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Quoting 'tuscanred' when your seen in the flesh I think you can make a straight girl bi and a gay guy straight ...........your just to hot for rhp This is totally going on the "Best compliment" thread.

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    I dribble in my sleep.

  • inspirit

    inspirit

    12 years ago

    no time to read..whats it say TR

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    I'm glad you got rid of the drooling thing....it was giving me flashbacks of the movie turner and hooch. - Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    I loved the drooling comment (she says wiping the morning dribble from the corner of her mouth) I love a great sense of humour and well written profile and I think you nailed both xx Tuscanred and ms devious, as usual you make a forum worth reading xx- Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    I think you should date my daughter!   It's a shame she isn't quiet as open as her mum sexually or i'd so show her your profile!

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    very Alfred Hitchcock.

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    Will you please stop changing your profile now? You're clogging up my activity stream.

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    That's very nice of you, thank you.

  • RHP

    RHP User

    12 years ago

    great profile I liked the comment about dribbling in your sleep what more could we ask for honesty and humour!!