ElleRazor

ElleRazor

M45

Suggestions welcome

February 07 2016

Hi there, It'd be great to know what you good people out there think of my profile. I just uploaded some pics and am open to any suggestions for improvement that you may have. Thanks for your time :)

Comments

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Must be something in it.. lol..

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    I like it, no hints or tips here

  • AnnieWhichway

    AnnieWhichway

    9 years ago

    Nothing out of order that i can see. But there's not much that grabs me either. I would change the profile heading from the standard one. You have a single bold line that can be worded to grab the viewers attention. Use it with some clever wording that might describe you or your activities. And more photos mixed up a bit. Different scenes. Try some with some side lighting that might show some muscle definition. Some cheeky nude ones?

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    There's nothing really wrong with your profile, you've filled in all the blanks and you have made a bit of an effort to write something about yourself and you have some pics. It's certainly adequate. For me though, there's nothing that grabs my interest. It's generic and bland, and both your blurbs and your pics read and look like hundreds of other single guy profiles on here. You say that you are looking for interesting people who are a bit off centre...but there's nothing in your profile that indicates you are off centre or why you would be interested in people who are. Also, what do you actually consider to be off centre? I think you could try to show more of your personality in your profile...some of what makes you unique and interesting yourself. Plus, a bit more detail about what you're looking for. You list your orientation as experimental....what does that mean for you? What things would you like to try, what experiences are you looking for? As for the pics, perhaps try and be a bit more creative. You could have a look at some of the male forum posters' profiles, some of them have great pics and it could give you some ideas of things to try. You can turn off viewing notifications if you don't want other guys to know you've looked at their profile. Again, try to bring out and show your personality in your pics. Hope that helps, good luck.

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Your on my patch. I'm not helping you ! Ok one tip, "fortune favours the bold" that's it, sink or swim.

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Boring! No personality whatsoever...

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    I know you.......you could put so much more of yourself into that profile handsome. But its totally up to you xx

  • Mischeviouslad

    Mischeviouslad

    9 years ago

    Plus........ are you pitching for a "Bonds in the bathroom" gig? ..... just like 95% of other guys in here.

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Quoting 'Luck_Dragon' You could have a look at some of the male forum posters' profiles, some of them have great pics and it could give you some ideas of things to try. You can turn off viewing notifications if you don't want other guys to know you've looked at their profile. You can read our minds now. Scary. Oh well, back to the drawing board in this eternal battle...

  • ElleRazor

    ElleRazor

    9 years ago

    I really appreciate your comments and will go back and inject a bit more personality into it, I have plenty of it after all but can be hard to write about yourself. I never realised I had the standard headline, must've never noticed the option to change it. Bonds in the bathroom? Haha, well they make the best jocks and the bathroom is the only place I could find a good place to prop up my phone to take pics with a timer. Selfies can be difficult! I have used some different pics before but I just wanted to take some nice clear ones so viewers could get a proper look at my body to show I'm not trying to hide it. But yes, a bit of variety is a good idea. Thanks again everyone, I appreciate you taking the time to have a look. :) - Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Quoting 'Summer_solstice' I think it would serve boomstik to have a look at your profile! ☺ ...your too generous Summer. I think about doing one of these topics now and again...then I remember that my ego needs no validation. No offence intended boomstik! I speak on my own behalf only .

  • ElleRazor

    ElleRazor

    9 years ago

    good sir! Summer's right though, I had a look and your profile is a fun read :) - Posted from rhpmobile